Portfolio Entry #7 (Corrections)

Dear Sir or Madam
 I am writing to complain about the holiday camp: "Thomsuns Holiday Camp" which I visited this summer with my friends.
 First of all, we were promised to sleep in beautiful stone bungalows but we were deceived because we were given tents and we were said that all the meals were included but we ate spaghetti and sandwiches every day. Furthermore the brochure of the holiday camp said that we have included two activities in the camp: mountain-climbing and cycling but the mountain biking were cancelled for the whole week, the brochure said too that we were going to practice our English with local people and we did not have enough opportunities to do this. Finally you offered that we would had included free pick-up service from railway station but that was not true, nobody pick us up, we had to take a taxi.
 I would be grateful if you would give me a refund because I am obviously not satisfied.
 I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully, 
            Candela Coppola

PORTFOLIO #4 Thiago Espina De La Fuente - Candela Coppola

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PORTFOLIO #3 (Corrections)

Dear Ms. Romero,
                In my group we are ten girls. We would like to take part in photography because we like it and we have good cameras. And we want to go surfing too, we have never done this, so it would be fun and something new.
  About the end of the event is important to us to end it quite early on Sunday so we can be at home on Monday because we have an important school event. 
  In regards to the accommodation we would like to use your accommodation. Could yo send me some information about the hotel and the price? I saw on the website of the event that you have two hotels, we prefer the 'Maya's Hotel' because it looks more confortable.
I would apreciate it if you could give me your phone number and email address.
  Sincerely,
            Candela Còppola. 

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Flor and Cande

Hi Lauren, 
              it doesn't matter we can't meet on Monday morning, that's fine because on the Monday I have a business breakfast, so anyway it's impossible to meet you in the morning.
    We could meet at one o'clock at the train station. I'm going to be there waiting for you. On what platform can we meet? Text me when you're on the train.
    Then we can have something to eat but not in a little cafè, because I know the best restaurant in the centre of the city ''Martino's'', we can have lunch there.
    In the evening I've been invited to a friend's party, perhaps we could go together, would you like to?
    I'm looking forward to seeing you too, friend!
    Lots of love,
Cande.

Candela, Camila and Augusto. (UPPER 1)

Miley Cyrus is an actress and singer who is only 20 years old and has achieved a lot of things. Her father is a famous country singer. She starts in a Disney serie called Hanna Montana with oly 14 years old like the starring character Miley Stewart, and her father was character in the same serie. With that serie she took a laep, one year later all the girls love Miley Cyrus and want to be like she. Her live change suddenly when she left Diney Channel company, she cut her hair, now it is blonde and short, she gets a more sexy look and she is very thin. Her music changes too, she left the country stile and the song from Hanna Montana, and started sing a pop a little harder, with more controversial lyrics, doing crazy videos where she is naked.
She used to be a nice girl.  She was used to singing country songs. She’s still getting used to being a provocative and controversial woman. Now she's used to doing crazy thing and calling everybody's attention. She will have to get use to listening all the critics about her changes.



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I remember what you wore on the first day 

You came into my life 

And I thought hey 


Maybe it's true, that I can't live without you 

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