martes, 7 de mayo de 2013

We have a teacher in the school called Amalia, she is very tall and plump, she is a person with a intimidating appearance. She is bland and her eyes are light blue, they look withe.

When we meet her she was very frightening and strict, she makes us to study a lot, but with the years she became a nicer person and good nature. She always is in that form in the first years because in that form she makes us more responsible.

Everybody who finished the high school say that she had taught them the most important study tecnics to be more easy the college without that tecnics they would disapprove everything. And we can say that everything we 've learned with her never forget it.

People always think that she isn't nice but actually when you know her you can found a very nice and kind woman. And all the people who already know her like that teacher.

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  1. We have a teacher at school called Amalia, she is very tall and plump, she is a person with an intimidating appearance. She is blonde and her eyes are light blue, they look withe.

    When we met her she was very frightening and strict, she makes us study a lot, but with the years she became a nicer person and good natured. She was always like that in the first years because in that way she makes us more responsible.

    Everybody who finished high school says that she has taught them the most important study tecnics to make college easier. Without that tecnics they would disapprove everything. And we can say that everything we 've learned with her will never be forgot.

    People always think that she isn't nice but actually when you know her you can find a very nice and kind woman. And all the people who already know her like that teacher.

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  2. VERY GOOD. There are some mistakes in grammar, but the vocabulary is used very well and your portfolio entry is very clear and well organized into paragraphs.

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